Today, we will look at a subscriber’s deck that was sent to me. | Want to get your deck reviewed? For $49.99 I will review your deck in the newsletter. Reply now to get a review and have your company shared with 25,000+ subscribers (including hundreds of VCs). | | This is a massively overcomplicated cover slide. I don’t need any of the patent information, I don’t need the founder's name, job title, company address, email or phone number. None of these added any value and serve only to distract from the information that actually needed to be here. Specifically, when looking at this, I completely overlook the one line because all this additional information overshadows it. | | This is not a problem, it’s a perspective framer. Nobody can solve all identity fraud; the product needs to solve a specific problem. This slide sets up the company for failure because you will be underdelivering when you don’t actually have a solution to identity fraud. | | This would be fine as part of a perspective framer, but it is concerning when you seem to be positioning identity fraud as the key problem to be solved. | | | | Daily News for Curious Minds | Be the smartest person in the room by reading 1440! Dive into 1440, where 4 million Americans find their daily, fact-based news fix. We navigate through 100+ sources to deliver a comprehensive roundup from every corner of the internet – politics, global events, business, and culture, all in a quick, 5-minute newsletter. It's completely free and devoid of bias or political influence, ensuring you get the facts straight. Subscribe to 1440 today. | Sign up now! | | Again, two issues: (i) this further cements that they are positioning themselves as solving all identity fraud, an issue that I don’t feel many VCs will believe can be solved by a single company. (ii) this data doesn’t mean anything. To state that your addressable market is every person is a joke; no VC will take that seriously. | | I am not an expert in this space, but I know for a fact that there are many other ways to authenticate identity. At this point, the deck has so many red flags that as an investor, I wouldn’t trust anything else to come. Losing the trust of VCs is a death sentence for any founder. | | | | | | | | Would you invest based on this deck? | | | In partnership with |  |
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